Nice try👍. But concentrate on your language. Read more such books to enrich your use of vocabulary. You are thinking in tamil and tried to dub it in English. That needs to be changed. If writing is your passion give your 100% else it doesn't come easy.
"oh my god"., he cried out aloud. His hands rested on the handrail of his gallery and eyes scanned the premise of his society the premise of his society with deep concern. "what happened?",. she said joining her friend . he replied it is just my old memories. She asked what is the old memories about a girl... yes. "It is about a girl in my school". I was in the 9th grade. The school had just reopened. After the long summer vacation had ended. we are all were happy to be in school. A few months passed and suddenly the climate season had changed its mood. It is an rainy season. The down pour would hover between mild to moderate rainfall. Friend interrupted .Stop this nonsense and say about your girl ."How does she looks.?" ...
"If a boy falls in love with you just remember If you break his heart he will never be the same ..Ever again" Boy started telling my 10th grade love story with a low voice and small pain in his heart. His friend noticed that my eyes were filled with tears. The school reopens, I was not happy with this summer vacation. All others in the class are happy except me, Because I missed her badly. I was like I wanted to talk to her I wanted to say how badly I need her presence in my future in my entire life but I cant express to her. The Girl in 10th was totally different. she never noticed me in class, she ignored me ...
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ReplyDeleteNice try👍. But concentrate on your language. Read more such books to enrich your use of vocabulary. You are thinking in tamil and tried to dub it in English. That needs to be changed.
ReplyDeleteIf writing is your passion give your 100% else it doesn't come easy.
ok bro. I wil change it. I try my level best next time.
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